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1st Book III Amazon Review

“Having read these first three episodes, I am ready to offer a review. The storyline is very well conceived. The characters are well fleshed out with none of the weaknesses common to too many hard science novels. The plot is very easy to follow yet without obvious connections. This story could go on for many enjoyable episodes. The only consistent flaw is the lack of a thorough professional editing job. There are wrong words, misspellings and numerous grammatical errors that detract from the experience. But these flaws are minor given the many strengths of the story. It is thoroughly enjoyable. I can’t wait for the next chapter.”

Always appreciate feedback. I’ve recently re-edited books I-III, so hopefully the issues regarding typos etc. have been addressed.


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